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A Play On A Play On Words MAG
When the tides change
I’ll be free
to drown among my people
in the ancient lands of nowhere
nowhere you would go
with a head upon my hat
and feet upon my shoes
it’s time to go inside
to survive
the cold of the air conditioning
in my room it’s harsh living
with the lights turned off
no one makes a sound
except the pitter patter of my soul
across the aluminum roof of my mind
like raindrops in your eye
all you are is a blurred image
thoughts once clear
are now hard to see
I have to retrieve my telescope
just to see you
still leaves me empty inside
’cause I think it’s my fault
that I have no idea
but I don’t know what to think
or where to begin
so I just sit and wait
for the tide to come in.
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nice. very flowy just like a poem should be. and comes to a natural and graceful stop. this is so cool. good metaphors.
but i have no idea what you are talking about.
It's good, very good. I like the way it flows from one thought to the next. And at the end it feels finished, I like that. Not all writers can pull that off so well.
I know there'd be some poems of mine you might like, but they're pending for now.
It would be great if you checked out the one that is there though.
nice work, this is great:)
i really enjoyed it and loveee your style of writing. it seems elegant and thoughtful, yet deep and true. great job!
i recently joined the site and most of my work hasn't been accepted but id love for you to view what has been and see what you think
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