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A Play On A Play On Words MAG
When the tides change
I’ll be free
to drown among my people
in the ancient lands of nowhere
nowhere you would go
with a head upon my hat
and feet upon my shoes
it’s time to go inside
to survive
the cold of the air conditioning
in my room it’s harsh living
with the lights turned off
no one makes a sound
except the pitter patter of my soul
across the aluminum roof of my mind
like raindrops in your eye
all you are is a blurred image
thoughts once clear
are now hard to see
I have to retrieve my telescope
just to see you
still leaves me empty inside
’cause I think it’s my fault
that I have no idea
but I don’t know what to think
or where to begin
so I just sit and wait
for the tide to come in.
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How exactly do you think it's cliche?
and as far as writing more universal things... Don't ever write while thinking I'm going to write about this... I just write... a lot of times it's just a conversation... or one sentence someone says that inspires me...
wow. I loved this-great metaphors and keep writing!!!
This is a really powerful poem. Good job. :) But I'm learning in Lit class right now that to make your work the most powerful it can be, take all abstract nouns out. That means every single noun that you can't touch or see, you should take out and replace with something you can - it's hard at first, but after a while your writing gets a lot better. Try it! And let me know if it works for you!
Cheers!
Mal :)
im loving the word play(:
very creative.
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i love this!!