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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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ktbug96 SILVER said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 4:15 pm
ktbug96 SILVER, Jericho, New York
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Favorite Quote:
~Make a wish, it's up to you, find the strength inside, and watch your dreams come true, you don't need a shooting star, the magic's right there in your heart, close your eyes, believe, and make a wish~ (yes it's from a song :D)

oh my gosh. it brought me to tears. this is absolutely amazing. keep on writing, blahblahblah, but! don't ever lose the quality of your work!

Nicole.Jones said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 2:52 pm
This is a really nice poem you wrote, sad. But it was super good and you have good talent. Its deep and would really get people thinking about how it would feel.

Duckie430 said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 2:15 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger.&quot;

beautiful.

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 1:30 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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outstanding and extremly talented check me out your work is deep andvery heartfelt keep it up!!

Jaysmile said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 1:17 pm
this poem was so beautiful and heartbreaking. i was sitting in class when i read it and burst into tears. this is incredible.

on Apr. 29 2010 at 9:45 am
YouAreMe BRONZE, Gering, Nebraska
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Just take the time to drink in the beauty of your surroundings

This is an amazing poem you should write more...even if it is different don't let the fear of people judging you get in the way...its your feelings dont let people tell you how to feel! keep rocking the poetry world!!!!!!!

on Apr. 29 2010 at 9:41 am
Jade-McKaye SILVER, West Jordan, Utah
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
what happened to a dream?

this stirred so much emotion in me, absolutely amazing, i loved it!

on Apr. 27 2010 at 6:28 pm
Haily_Jeanious BRONZE, Newark, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t do today what you will regret tomarrow.

I realy enjoyed reading this it was full of feeling and made me see through the writers eyes... keep writing you have talent!

on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:31 pm
stepheniemoins BRONZE, Crete, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.&quot; - Jimi Hendrix

Absolutely mind-blowing. It makes me respect having a mother more. Keep writing, you're amazing at it.

Metree SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 12:03 pm
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
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This poem is really amazing, I agree :)

I'll look at some of your work if you'll check out mine- I'm new on here :)


on Apr. 26 2010 at 7:27 am
princessness_16 SILVER, Dundee, New York
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wow. i'm actually at a loss for words...this poem is really...amazing.

on Apr. 25 2010 at 3:34 pm
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you&quot;-Rascal Flatts

Amazing poem, so deep and touching. Check out my work if you can id love your opinion!

on Apr. 24 2010 at 3:10 pm
gollyitshannah PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Connecticut
25 articles 6 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;So you want a heart? You don&#039;t know how lucky you are not to have one. Hearts will never be practical until they are made unbreakable&quot;

That was amazing. I almost cried. Thank you :)

on Apr. 17 2010 at 12:31 pm
wordlvr94 PLATINUM, El Dorado Hills, California
22 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All the world&#039;s a stage, and all the men and women merely players&quot; - William Shakespeare

That was amazingly deep! I feel so sorry for your loss but you really brought the emotions out in your words! Excellant job!

nancy19 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:00 pm
nancy19, Saugus, Massachusetts
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This was such a goood poem! it made me cry. It really shows how much you miss your mother.

Phantom<393 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:58 am
That was beautiful and it almost made me want to cry for you. I understand the wieght a loss has on your heart. keep it up.

wazowski said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:03 am
wazowski, Saugus, Massachusetts
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aw this is so sad but i liked it.

Sherie BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:25 pm
Sherie BRONZE, Saint Petersburg, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The only thing standing between me and total happiness is reality.&quot;<br /> &quot;I can&rsquo;t face the mirror, I&rsquo;ll break the glass. I can&rsquo;t live in the moment for the time will pass.&quot; -I wrote this one.

Awh that is really sad, I'm sorry you lost your mother, you're a great writer :]

AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:00 pm
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

i would like to apologize as well, rereading now [after much needed sleep] my choice of words made me come off as angry... or hurt... hmm and having you explain your comment, i wonder along side you now. my deepest of words stem from my deepest pains. the passing of my mother, my best friends self mutilation. when i was younger i loved to read. words were always my biggest escape, i dont think my writing would have peeked though if she were still here... i guess thats where the whole... everything happends for a reason comes into play. my mother passes and i am gifted with words. my best friend hurts and i'm off to study child/teen councling/psychology. its odd to say now though, im thankful for my pains as much as i really [really] could have done without them. lol and thank you, for taking the time to explain your comment, i deeply appriciate that.

on Apr. 13 2010 at 1:16 am
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
11 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words.&quot;

And, if i may say in utmost respect, what slayergrape said is, in turn, rediculous as well. Flowery words and complicated constructions are not the basis of poetry. It is indeed the impact of the story or message or feeling expressed. It's all about expression, not fancy words. No one can hope to call him/herself a true writer should he be arrogant enough as to believe such fallacies. It's what our words and constructions (no matter what choice) convey.