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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Jun. 12 2010 at 1:00 pm
PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow

this is amazingggg, i hope everything is fine though. But keep on writing you have a gift.

on Jun. 12 2010 at 12:01 pm
hatetoheartbreak BRONZE, Grayson, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
how do you expect some one to love you?... if you wont let them?

woooooooooooooooow! that was sooo pretty! i think of m mom too:) keep going !

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on Jun. 12 2010 at 7:42 am
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
4 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"

So SAD! I hope this is not from experience.... It's gorgeous.

on Jun. 10 2010 at 4:53 pm
blacknsexy360 SILVER, Glendale, Arizona
9 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"YOU CANT SUCCEED IF YOU DNT TRY"

I LOVE IT!!IT REALLY CAPTURED MY HEART!!!!!!MADE ME THINK OF MY MOTHER!!!!!

on Jun. 6 2010 at 7:42 pm
mpacheco15 BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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That's beautiful. It made me cry because my god father died and he didn't say good-bye to me either. I was really confused, and I feel guilty because I can't even remember his face.

on Jun. 5 2010 at 5:18 pm
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

this is beautiful. keep writing

on Jun. 4 2010 at 6:22 pm
skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

your writing is fantastic i love it keep up the work...

Hanna424 said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:05 pm
Hanna424, Snohomish, Washington
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That is soooooo good:) great job!!!!

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on May. 27 2010 at 2:29 pm
Eowyn BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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I love this poem! It is so sad but so true.  People who complain about their parents don't realize how lucky they are to even have them.  I'm sorry about your loss.

on May. 22 2010 at 11:44 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

i love it! it reminds me a lot of my dad. great writing! 

comment minee and rate themm?


on May. 22 2010 at 11:10 am
docta_rini SILVER, Detroit, Michigan
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this is really good...i can't really say i know how you feel because i have a mother (and am blessed to). but i understand it must be really painful.

on May. 21 2010 at 9:51 pm
mariahLynn SILVER, Craig, Colorado
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My mom died too, of cancer, and people do abuse the blessing of having a mother, well I would trade places with them any day.

on May. 21 2010 at 9:46 pm
mariahLynn SILVER, Craig, Colorado
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this is one of the best pieces i have ever read, better than edger allen poe. But this peice made me cry, not because i feel sorry or blessed, but becauseI go through it too. And this poem is soo true.  this is an awesome poem.

on May. 21 2010 at 7:01 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
12 articles 0 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

This made me want to cry. So hard. I feel so blessed now, being able to have my mom with me.

 

I'm sorry for your loss. :'(


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on May. 21 2010 at 6:58 pm
niesh13 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love Me, Hate Me. I Really Don&#039;t Care . <br /> Truth Is...Life Goes On , With or Without You

i realy love this poem. i jus wrote sumthin lik this but it wasnt approved yet. i wanna b a writer so do yu think yu can giv me sum pointers.? i think yur realy good.

on May. 21 2010 at 6:45 pm
LizLockett13 BRONZE, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
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Im oh so sorry for your loss! i know how it feels i lost my dad a few years back. so i understand where your going!

on May. 21 2010 at 6:30 pm
Kate Camp BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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I am sorry that it happened but it was a really good poem.

on May. 21 2010 at 4:40 pm
cinderella PLATINUM, BEVERLY HIILLS, California
38 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is a book, you can write or read, but what ever you do keep flipping the pages

im sorry that u lost ur mother! i really know what it feels like to loose someone  u love! great way to express it though love this keep wrting

on May. 21 2010 at 3:58 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
41 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you&#039;ll never know what it&#039;s like to love

i'm so sorry for your loss,

the poem is the greatest poem i've read in a while, you have talent,

and your mother would be prund of you. all mother are no matter what we do


on May. 21 2010 at 1:01 pm
flipsters BRONZE, Benton Harbor, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is not fair, it&#039;s how you take the cards that are dealt that matter.&quot;<br /> &quot;Everything will work out in the end, if it&#039;s not working out then it&#039;s not the end yet.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the clouds of today hide the sunshine of tomorrow.&quot;

I'm so sorry for your loss. Writing is a great way to express feelings, and this was amazing. It shows so much emotion. The words you chose worked together perfectly, it gave  me such a vivid image. Thank you for writing. Definately keep it up. Great job :)