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Falling

December 5, 2010
By dancerforlifex GOLD, Monson, Massachusetts
dancerforlifex GOLD, Monson, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is to give life a meaning.


water

quick




ly




fal




ling



swi


ft

ly
“watch







water-crash

out”

ing


HARD





and

animals




LOUD
,

rocks


so



shifts









slippery.

breeze








water

from






to
left
























right.








below


splish


splash



splosh




on





th





e






p






e






b






b







l







e








s.

water quickly falling swiftly
“watch out” animals below
water crashing hard and loud
rocks so slippery.
breeze shifts water from left to right
splish, splash, splosh on the pebbles


The author's comments:
The translation of my concrete poem is listed below the poem. :-)

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