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Unorthodox Angel
December 13, 2010
Summary:
When Phoenix gets shot by her drug-addicted mother, she finds herself in a hospital. She meets a bad boy named Jakobie. He's covered in tattoos, has black hair, and has a distinct air about him. After he saves her life twice, she finds that she can't live without him, and finds the reason he saved her might have to do with angels.
Sidney S.
Unorthodox Angel
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This book has 48 comments.
laurenangela SILVER said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 3:09 pm
i do appreciate your comment, but i am a fan of twilight, and i know that only one thing in this story is similar. thank you.
laurenangela SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2011 at 10:44 am
thanks! i always enjoy feedback!!
this is a really cute story :) I like the plot a lot and its very entertaining. Just from my point of view you should work on sentence fluency and varying word choice a bit though, because it'll help your overall work :) check out my stuff if u want, but nice job again
laurenangela SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2011 at 12:40 pm
thank you so much! i love feedback on my stories, positive and negative. this is my first love story, so it's good to know i did it right! thanks again!
Behindthelooks11 said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 11:03 am
I really liked your story. Phoenix and Jakobie falling in love seems natural and not forced. :)
laurenangela SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2010 at 6:34 pm
hey musiclover94! this is laurenangela. you really made my day with your nice comment. i needed it a lot. thanks.
musiclover94 GOLD said...
on Dec. 19 2010 at 5:35 pm
I think it was so sweet to write this for you grandfather and I'm really sorry for your loss. You're a great writer, keep it up!!
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Favorite Quote:
If you don't like me, remember it's mind over matter. I don't mind, and you don't matter.
I disagree, only the crash and hospital scene was from Twilight (not that there's anything wrong with Twilight). You didn't fail.
I really liked it, it was really sweet. Jakobi is my type of man! If only there were actual guys like him (sigh). I thought your dedication was really sweet, too.