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Unorthodox Angel
Summary:
When Phoenix gets shot by her drug-addicted mother, she finds herself in a hospital. She meets a bad boy named Jakobie. He's covered in tattoos, has black hair, and has a distinct air about him. After he saves her life twice, she finds that she can't live without him, and finds the reason he saved her might have to do with angels.
Sidney S.
Unorthodox Angel
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Hi.
your story is good; i dont care if its kinda like twilight or whatever.. the title is really catchy and so is the pitch. I suggest sending it inf r publishing :)
can your check out my book, "the diary of a teenaged lunatic"?
thanks and keep up the great work :)
thanks!
thanks!
thank you!!
Well, I read your first chapter and here were my thoughts.
Praises:
1. I liked the mystery to it, it's a good way to start a book.
2. I liked the relations between each person in the room.
Suggestions:
1. SLOW IT DOWN! (does that make sense) The first chapter went so fast from one person to another I felt a bit rushed. You did 'slow down' on the subject of the young girl, but doing a bit more would be helpful. 'Zoom In' on each person more!
2. Try to set the scene a tiny bit more. I was slightly confused where the setting was exactly.
Overall, really nice
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