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Loving You

July 11, 2013
By Anonymous

Pondering about love
Is it true or illusion
Your beauty allures

But it cannot be
As our love is fictitious
Like a fairy tale

© Anonymous

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sophistryxo SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 11:32 am
sophistryxo SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;There was nowhere to go but everywhere, so just keep on rolling under the stars.&rdquo;<br /> -Jack Kerouac

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This is my favorite poem of yours! It's a relatable topic and I especially like the second stanza!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 6:05 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I think many of us have this doubt. Whether or not love is real. Or too fairy tale-ish. Very relateable. It's makes you think. Very well done. Love that title too.