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A stormy Night

September 8, 2009
By Anonymous

A Stormy Night
Lightning lights the sky
Locked in my room terrified
Thunder rolls on by

Looking out window
Terrified of what comes next
Wish for good night sleep

Dawn slowly rises
The country air blows softly
And brings with it spring

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Yld777 SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2017 at 7:33 am
Yld777 SILVER, Tirana, Other
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nice one !!!!!!111
NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2015 at 5:47 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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I half agree! check out my work!
NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2015 at 5:46 pm
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I agree with nelehjr!
nelehjr DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 7 2013 at 11:48 pm
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
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Really liked this. You took three hiakus and slapped 'em together right? The rythem and imagery are great, however, I think you accidentally placed your title as the first line. NOW SHOW YOURSELF ANONYMOUS FEIND!
writer3499 GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2012 at 9:09 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Really loved this! Great job capturing the moment!
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:27 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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oh wait, it is a haiku! except you typed the title of the poem along with it...
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 9:37 am
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I felt the SAME!! except this is not a haiku.
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:45 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
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ummm... This is a nice poem and all but it's not a haiku
NDeflip said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:53 am
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Sick poem! I felt like i was in a stromy night!
Kdominick11 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:49 am
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I like how i felt like i was actually there.
samantha13 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:45 am
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This is a really good poem! It gives me a good picture :)
nancy19 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:43 am
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Good poem! It was very descriptive
Eric DeMeo said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:17 am
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Coool Poem!
karinaaaxo0 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:46 am
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I like your poem. It has good imagery.
Alyssa(: PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:49 pm
Alyssa(: PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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I love this! It flows great and it paints a picture in your mind and I also love it because you can relate to it!
Bandgeek16 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:27 pm
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This paints a very good picture. Nice job!
Coreezy said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 1:21 pm
I liked all the description in your poem. It painted a picture in my head.All pretty good you migt want to try and make it flow because it was a little choppy.