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Sunshine that I share with you

February 26, 2011
By Justbeme SILVER, Burlington, Washington
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My joy is sunshine
So there are no cloudy days
That I share with you

© Roopa S., San Jose, CA

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I wrote this for the ones I loved
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Justbeme SILVER said...
on May. 3 2011 at 9:56 pm
Justbeme SILVER, Burlington, Washington
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wow thanks! If you like i could review some of your work. I would really like to get better at writing so if you could look at some of my work that would be awesome!
Allthegoodnamesaretaken BRONZE said...
on May. 1 2011 at 3:09 pm
Allthegoodnamesaretaken BRONZE, OKC, Oklahoma
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This one's realy good. I actually don't have any constructive criticism. It's awesome just the way it is. :)