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oblivion

August 11, 2014
By veganteen PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
veganteen PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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why is it
that in the face
of the gaping chasm
end of the tunnel
open-casket burial
wooden-cross crucifixion
in the face of the death
that awaits us all
I grapple?

why am I sitting
in wooden chairs
straight back
smiling lips
vying to control
the void,
to get an upper hand
in the battle
I am fighting
behind my ribs.

I do not pray.
I am not
vulnerable.
I refuse to get down
on my knees
and beg.

instead,
I sit
straight back
smiling lips
I sit
until I fall.



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on Aug. 15 2014 at 6:09 pm
veganteen PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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I actually didn't think of the whole atheist thing. For me it was more of a fear-of-death, but I see how it could be  taken that way (as I am an atheist, and we don't really have a "safety net."). Thank you for your opinion, as well as the reccomendation! 

on Aug. 15 2014 at 1:53 pm
Darcy152 BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
As long as men die, liberty will never perish." ~ Charlie Chaplin in The Great Dictator

I really enjoyed this poem. For me, it is an athiest coping with their own oblivion. I truly related to these feelings. This poem makes me think of section 6 of Walt Whitman's A Song of Myself, in which he talks about how everyone's life is worthwhile. If you haven't read it, I encourage you too! It always makes me feel better.