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Don't Judge Me

November 5, 2013
By ego98ortiz BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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ego98ortiz BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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A creative man is motivated by the desire to achieve, not by the desire to beat others.<br /> -Ayn Rand

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You don’t know me
Don’t judge me

Live my past and my present,
And then tell me
You don’t know what I've been through

I've been devoured by double bladed knives
I've shed winter night tears
I've sat in the corner alone
Don’t judge me

I've had no one to consult me
No one to give me an inspiration
No one to pull me up from my darkest moments

I've sat down alone
Drowned in my ocean of tears

I've been through many things
So until you know me
Don’t judge me

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

The author's comments:
For everyone who has gone through dark moments, don't let no one judge you for you have overcame what people thought was the impossible.
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lakekid33 SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 12:16 pm
lakekid33 SILVER, Hartville, Ohio
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To say this is a great poem is an understatement, I can't wait to read more
CreativeWriter86 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 12:06 pm
CreativeWriter86 PLATINUM, None, Louisiana
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This is deeper than I can comprehend and I believe that it is beautiful work. Keep writing. And God is always a friend.