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June 3, 2013
By freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston


Time ceases.

My heart skips a beat.

The world drops.

I fall to my feet.

The clouds spin.

I look to the sky.

A hand reaches.

I choke out a cry.

A voice speaks.

My eyes dart away.

The sound repeats.

My soul seems to sway.

The universe splits.

I'm unable to breathe.

The whirlwind roars.

My mind wants to seethe.

A door opens.

I stare through the hole.

A creature looks back.

The eyes shaped like a bowl.

The portal opens.

I want my freedom.

A cheer shouts.

I've entered the kingdom.


The author's comments:
this is about the end of the world and how someone is saved by making the right decision :)

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on Jul. 20 2013 at 7:24 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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I agree with GraphicWriter. that was really good!

on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:19 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

wow thank u!! :)

on Jun. 15 2013 at 12:01 am
GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
63 articles 10 photos 89 comments
In short sentences, you have gathered little glimpses of dreams... Like I can see the creature and it is reading this to me, painting pictures in my mind. Beautiful and yet daunting at the same time.