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Its Raining Tonight

April 9, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns


Come hold my hand,
Its raining outside, we should wet our pride
Come hold these hands,
I might ask you something regarding love
Come take these fingers,
Its raining outside, this is the most romantic moment of our life
Did you ever picture? I would request . . . . . . .
Some fact proposing love in this tiring night
Just put behind what’ll happen tomorrow
Lets get dampen in this lovely rainy night
I am not asking you to come outside with me
I am hauling you with my muscular hands on the rain outside
Though I knew you wouldn’t deny, but didn’t make blissful?
I am your weakness, touching your tempting body



Like this rain tonight
Dance with me but there is no music
However the rain is singing to make a amorous night
Hey! Did you see its raining tonight


The author's comments:
the poem is about love

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on Aug. 10 2013 at 10:57 am
DeathOfAStar GOLD, Kailua, Hawaii
11 articles 1 photo 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Emancipate yourself from mental slavery&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Bob Marley

Awh it's cute (: 

on Apr. 26 2013 at 11:42 am
Thecurseofdestiel SILVER, Denton, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 19 comments
Someone has Talent!!!

on Apr. 21 2013 at 3:30 am
PriyaModi BRONZE, Indore, Other
1 article 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like the way i am,need no transformation,,,LOVE LIFE.

Its fine..gud.

on Apr. 20 2013 at 4:50 am
Just-Another-Girl GOLD, Keighley, Other
17 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
- &quot;A coward may survive...but a hero..a hero lives on in the hearts of the people he saved&quot;<br /> <br /> - &quot;Words don&#039;t have the power to hurt people, unless the person who said it means a lot&quot;<br /> <br /> -<br /> You say that love is nonsense. I tell you it is no such thing._

Okay, firstly I apologise, I tend to be really critical so please take no offense. I mean maybe its because i hate love in general but I don't know... what i do know is your poem doesnt flow, It's like several seperate statements put in a paragraph... try using connective language to add the the fluency ... secondly, i hate to crush your hopes and dreams but this is unrealstic... once agajn sorry  

on Apr. 19 2013 at 11:08 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

This poem is really nice. I think you did a great job! 

on Apr. 19 2013 at 2:09 am
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors &amp; sights of beauty in spite of having thorns

thanx ! ! !

on Apr. 19 2013 at 2:07 am
TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
26 articles 28 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon because even if you miss you&#039;ll still end up among the star&#039;s

this is actually the best I have read in a while. I'm sure it will be put in the mag one day 

on Apr. 19 2013 at 2:06 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

Aw this one is cute! I really like this one- simple beauty and almost innocent. Very cute again XD