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My dreams

March 1, 2012
By Savonstar_13 PLATINUM, Norfork, Arkansas
Savonstar_13 PLATINUM, Norfork, Arkansas
38 articles 11 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.


I dream I’m falling
From a sky of dark lavender
With twisted, taunting clouds
My whole being in a flounder
The cold piercing winds around me like infinite shrouds
I awake bawling
I dream I’m at a tea party
Lilac lips and fuchsia hair
Burnt almond flavors on my tongue
I sit upon a vanilla lace chair
Their maniacal eye stalked and stung
I awake holding a Barbie
I dream I’m alone
No judgment yet no support
I long for touch, as I long for sound’
The blank walls contort
On said empty walls I pound
I awake reaching for my phone
I dream he’s with another
Their arms so tight
Love in their eyes
No vision of me in sight
My mind is filled with weeping skies


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on Mar. 5 2012 at 9:29 am
Baby.Boo PLATINUM, Casper, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you obey the rules you miss all the fun!&quot;<br /> - Katharine Hepburn

This was very beautifully written and had excellent word choice. I loved it. Keep writing. :)

Oreozz SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 5:54 pm
Oreozz SILVER, Palmer, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The only thing I would change about you is your last name&quot;

 This is beautifully writen!! Love all of the words you used they just pulled me in!!! AMAZING!!