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Butterflies

May 20, 2011
By dejavoo13579 PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
dejavoo13579 PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
27 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Drama is for movies not reality- unknown


You know it’s real
When he’s not around and you still catch a chill
You know it’s real when he looks you in the eyes
And you feel thousands of butterflies.



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on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:05 am
dejavoo13579 PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
27 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Drama is for movies not reality- unknown

Thanks its nice to finally get some feed back. I dont get a lot of comments. IDK why cause i write some really good stuff.

on Jun. 2 2011 at 4:03 pm
PennyM.L SILVER, Lynwood, California
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I love it! it's so cute. and i don't think it's unoriginal. i mean, yeah everybody says things like that "i feel butterflies when i look at him" but i havent read a poem that says that. your poem's sweet. :)

on May. 29 2011 at 4:37 pm
dejavoo13579 PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
27 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Drama is for movies not reality- unknown

Thanks but how is it unoriginal?

on May. 29 2011 at 12:55 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
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Short, sweet and completely accurate.  I like it.  It seems a little too unoriginal though.