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Need You

June 21, 2009
By SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
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SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

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A rainbow of life
A light in the dark
No more shattered dreams
You're in my heart

A chorus of hope
A summer wish
Swimming through a life parade
Like a dreaming fish

Clattered desires
Won't you come here
With you around
No reason to fear

The attic of thoughts
Stories untold
Watching as life
Slowly unfolds

Catching a glimpse
Eyes on the prize
Don't even care
What's wrong and what's right

All that I need
Is you by my side
To forget all the times
I feared and I cried

© Cory Z., Babylon, NY

The author's comments:
I write whatever comes to mind in my stories and poems. I hope one day to also have a book published. If I ever do, my Best Friend Shannon is getting the first autographed copy..lol!
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SilverAngel SILVER said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 2:02 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

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Thank you all for taking the time to comment, how can I fix it?
EternalMadness GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 6:48 pm
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it&#039;s what you make<br /> I say it&#039;s up to fate<br /> It&#039;s woven in my soul<br /> I need to let you go<br /> Your eyes, they shine so bright<br /> I want to save their light<br /> I can&#039;t escape this now<br /> Unless you show me how<br /> When you feel my heat<br /> Look into my eyes<br /> It&rsquo;s where my demons hide

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its pretty good but it does need a bit of work!
SilverAngel SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 5:30 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end.&quot; ~Me

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How can I fix it?
Anonymous BRONZE said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 1:09 pm
Anonymous BRONZE, Colorado Spring, Colorado
3 articles 6 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I hope someday somebody wants to hold you for 20 minutes straight and that&#039;s all they do. They don&#039;t pull away. They don&#039;t look at your face. They don&#039;t try to kiss you. All they do is wrap you up in their arms and hold on tight, without an ounce of selfishness to it.

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I was confused the whole time, needs work.
SilverAngel SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:12 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end.&quot; ~Me

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I have lot's of work pending approval!
SilverAngel SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:10 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end.&quot; ~Me

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Thank you so much!!!!! I will work on that!
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:01 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
29 articles 0 photos 84 comments
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oh, and i love ur icon!!!! lol it is adorable! :D
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 6:55 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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Wow that poem is awesome! the only thing i would say is that some of the words don't rhyme, like "dark" and "heart", "untold" and "unfolds" and "Prize" and right". i used to do that then my english teacher taught us about poetry and i learned how even tho it sounds like it rhymes it has to be exact... it's no biggy, though,it's just for the future. otherwise i really love the feeling, and the last 2 lines are so powerful! :D good job and please publish something else soon!