Thank you... :)

I'll post more when i can,, but right now school started and everything... and my laptop is broken soo I'll write more when i could.

Thanks so much for liking my story :)

Great job! I have to say, I think the fact that Romeo respected Nahla's sleeping space says a lot of good things about him. I have several ideas for your book and if you like them, you can use them.

1) Lindsay should sabatoge Romeo and Nahla's realtionship in a very cruel way, maybe by telling Romeo lies about Nahla and Nathan being together still.

2) Romeo should take Nahla to an ocean-side picnic, where a lot of fans can mob Romeo and Nahla gets annoyed.

3) Romeo's old flame should show up and make Nahla slightly jealous and edgy.

4) Nikolai can be angry for Nahla talking to him that way and call their parents to tell them about Nahla and Romeo. Her parents can then try to force Nahla away from Romeo because they think he can hurt her.

Keep writing please. This story is very interesting, but I think it can still benefit from some more details. You should describe more of what Nahla is thinking inside her head instead of a more third-person point of view. What people look like, the expression on their face, what people are wearing, and what they are doing are all great things that can use a lot of description and make your story more real. Overall, I think that once you fix these things, your book can become more thorough and deep.

I really liked it!  I hope you post more! I only think that you could add more detail maybe.  Yet a very good story never the less!

Wow! I really enjoy this story. It's very creative and fun. My favorite scene is when Romeo's new got sprained! I thought that was outright hilarious. Also, I know you said that you're not sure about this chapter, but it's great. Keep writing!