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Till Death do us part
April 25, 2011
Summary:
Read through the romatic tale of love and tragady abou king aurthor
Kirsty C.
Till Death do us part
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Favorite Quote:
"My pen is the barrel of the gun. Remind me which side you should be on."
I have a few tips for you. First off, the use of "thou" and a mix of modern phrases (example: "Thou what," her mother said shocked.) makes the text come in through my mind as a little awkward. I suggest just skip the "thou" and just use "you." I haven't read many historical fiction stories set in that time period where they used "thou."
Second of all, there were a one or two errors in spelling and such. "The clothes SEEM to fade out..." and "dieing" is spelled "dying."
Finally, don't let my criticism stop you from being a writer. Just writing to write makes good practice. As the saying goes, "Practice makes perfect." Maybe look at my stuff, too? Write on!
-Dino