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My Love for Sweets

June 26, 2015
By RandomChild SILVER, Bakersfield, California
RandomChild SILVER, Bakersfield, California
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A sonnet for my nice, lovely sweets

Sweeter than the birds that tweet

You are my love, my life

Because of you I have no strife

With frosting so white

And brighter than any light

My sweets, my love

I adore you like little doves

Your sweet, fluffy cake

Which everyday I take

Your sweetness shines

Brighter than stars a thousand times

My love for you grows stronger by day

An everlasting rose of May



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on Jun. 19 2016 at 10:22 am
YoungBeauty GOLD, Claremont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
" Beauty isn't about having pretty face. It's about having a pretty mind, a pretty heart, and a pretty soul"

Honestly, this poem made me so hungry reading it :). This makes me so happy!

on Aug. 26 2015 at 12:12 pm
BlanishCoffee BRONZE, Sterling, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Women like 2 things,knives and unicorns."

so fricking sweet made me smile amazing way to start off my day ;3

.king. SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2015 at 4:33 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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Very sweet... I can relate. :3

on Jul. 6 2015 at 9:49 pm
"Phoebus Apollo of the Silver Spoon" Roxane (the love of my life) once told my friend Christian (RIP) that he needed to, "Be brilliant... be eloquent... [to] gather your dreams into words" I think you'd have made Roxane proud with this poem. I've never met you, but the quality of this sonnet suggests a large nose!

on Jul. 6 2015 at 2:59 pm
Salutations! "Phoebus Apollo of the Silver Spoon" Roxane (the love of my life) once told my friend, Christian (RIP) to, "Be eloquent... Be brilliant.. gather your dreams into words" I think you would have made Roxane proud!

on Jul. 6 2015 at 3:20 am
Phoebus Apollo of the Silver Spoon. Roxane (the love of my life) once told my friend Christian to, "Be eloquent.. Be brilliant... gather your dreams into words" I think you'd have made Roxane proud.

Bella_K said...
on Jul. 6 2015 at 2:35 am
Bella_K, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
"All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us" - JRR Tolkien

This is a fantastic sonnet! Keep up the good work! #favoritepoet on teenink