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April 22, 2015
By Dreaming-Of-Fire BRONZE, Duncan, South Carolina
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"Most people see the world in black and white, but grey I don't know what to do with grey." -Mass Effect 2 (The Video Game)

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A single moment, gazing onto you.
My breath is taken. All my senses lost.
Maybe you will be amaze’ by me too?
To meet you would be worthy of the cost.

So taken, unknowingly. Falling fast.
Disregarded. Never seen nor was heard.
I reminisce. Left behind in the past.
My love for him is just a single word.

The words he sings, it shows me inner thoughts.
Never him to be fazed by all the fame.
Music flowing from the six lonely strings.
Oh, and the crowd chants out his band’s nickname.

My love for one with all of his hair dyed.
“Unnoticed” Words my mouth had softly sighed.

© Molly L., Bethesda, MD

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Megan Moore said...
on May. 6 2015 at 4:29 pm
Megan Moore, Chicago, Illinois
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Amazing! I can relate so much. All of those heartaches from past and present crushes. Did you write this about a specific person?