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Dance Floor

September 24, 2014
By Mango621 BRONZE, Frankfort, Michigan
Mango621 BRONZE, Frankfort, Michigan
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I glanced across the dance floor,
you were the one that caught my eye.
As I glide toward the handsome guy before me,
you’re not the one I thought you were.

You do not dance, and simply stand waiting.
I noticed you but it’s like I’m not even there.
So I go back to my friends in the corner,
I just shake that feeling away.

You spot me and leave,
like I wouldn’t notice you walking away.
When I turn around who do I see,
you before me. Wanna dance?

He was just not one to dance alone
a feeling that I share.


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece for my 12th grade english class. This is the original not yet revised copy. I need comments for help revising this piece.


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