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The End

June 24, 2014
By RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
30 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it."


I reside in the dark under the stars
They're the only light to see my scars
A tear has fallen
A night has gone silent

I reflect on my soul to see a bloodied face
Not in my mind or the world for me is a safe place
A tear has fallen
A night has gone silent

Being in the cold I see my breath
I feel an embrace, I feel the hands of Death
A tear has fallen
A night has gone silent

My wings are clipped, I cannot fly
Thus I have to whisper to you goodbye
A tear has fallen
A night has gone silent

Now that all, but memories are gone
And this game of life has come undone
A tear has fallen
A night has gone silent

These emotions and thoughts were inevitable
I just hope my path choices are forgivable
A tear has fallen
A night has gone silent

But all has broken, nothing can mend
Now here we are, we've reached the end
A tear has fallen
A night has gone silent

The last tear has fallen
The last night has gone silent.



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on Sep. 17 2014 at 1:15 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

No problem brother ^_^ Thank you as well for inspiring and helping me out and this only through your poems.

on Aug. 1 2014 at 3:40 am
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
30 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it.&quot;

I'm glad you could go with the ebb and flow of this peom. I also greatly appreciate the 5 stars. I will kepp writing in hopes my future poems help you as well. Thank you for commenting and letting me know just how you feel. 

on Jul. 26 2014 at 9:17 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

Amazing!! I like the detail use it made me dive into the poem and feel every single word. Though anyway I could've relate to this even without the detail cuz I have already been through this. I liked it a lot and you surely should cary on and keep writing. This defenitly deserves a 5 star rating :D

on Jul. 21 2014 at 4:42 pm
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
30 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it.&quot;

I sure will Renda. I greatly appreciate the fact you cared enough to comment. Thank you.

on Jul. 21 2014 at 4:40 pm
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
30 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it.&quot;

Thank you for your comment. I will keep going and writing as you've asked. I hope my future poems help you as well.

on Jul. 10 2014 at 9:53 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This has so much feeling. You're a wonderful and talented writer. I love your poem. Your peom has a connection to me somehow, becasue I've felt this way before. Don't ever give up, and know you can still fly. Know that you're a treasure, and that there's still hope. Thank you, for sharing this. 

on Jul. 10 2014 at 1:44 am
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust.&quot; --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

Dude I am flabbergasted! This poem is incredible. Everything about it was fabulous and beautiful. Keep writing! :)