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Dreams

May 29, 2013
By Anonomaly BRONZE, Chaska, Minnesota
Anonomaly BRONZE, Chaska, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The mystery of your own imagination can be far more enthralling than reality, truly.&quot;<br /> -Cryaotic (chaoticmonki)


Still upon my bed lay I this dark night

Waiting for darkness to cover the day

the stars, they sparkle, so clean and so bright

"Please let me dream well" is all that I pray

My eyes are closed, covers up to my chin

I relive the day, and all that has passed

I wander farther toward sleep's dark grin

and let my burdens fall from what was mask'd

My dreams so sweet, like a song of the mind

My thoughts so pure, for the pain'd heart inside

The melody, lovely-sounding and kind

They melt away the distraught that resides



This world enchanted for the tired soul

Of which reality takes not a toll


The author's comments:
When I was younger, dreams were a way for me to have an adventure. They still are.

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on Sep. 9 2013 at 7:50 pm
ShadowMoon SILVER, Coronado, California
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I love it!

on Jul. 29 2013 at 3:34 pm
Anonomaly BRONZE, Chaska, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The mystery of your own imagination can be far more enthralling than reality, truly.&quot;<br /> -Cryaotic (chaoticmonki)

Thank you! :D
Sorry this reply is so late, I've been uber busy lately with other projects. I will be checking out your work sometime in the near future ;)
 

on Jun. 8 2013 at 1:17 pm
WrenArrington, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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I think you did a great job evoking dreams with your word choice. I can relate to this because I too spend the minutes before falling asleep hoping I'll have awesome dreams; unfortunately that very rarely happens. Anyway, nice job. I'd love some feedback from you on my work, if you have the time. Keep writing :)