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In the Valley

January 13, 2013
By DanielleB. SILVER, LaVernia, Texas
DanielleB. SILVER, LaVernia, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

In the valley of the Kings where dreams
Are built and made to last forever
The dreams that tend to give you wings
When in the valley nothing can sever
For nothing can break a child from what insipires
The thoughts that run through a childs pure mind
Because they have a love of what they desire
Is what brings them together and helps them bind
Dreams that are planned for future success
Dreams that strenght the difficulties of time
The one that always tend to impress
As you cross through the valley of the youth
The enthusiasm of a dream is equal to the first loose tooth



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zoid123 GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2013 at 12:36 pm
zoid123 GOLD, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
Trying to be someone your not is a waste of the person you currently are.

I love it. its got such a deep thought process behind it. 

on Feb. 22 2013 at 7:08 pm
DanielleB. SILVER, LaVernia, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments
thank you for your comment

on Feb. 22 2013 at 7:07 pm
DanielleB. SILVER, LaVernia, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments
thank you so much

on Feb. 22 2013 at 6:48 pm
DanielleB. SILVER, LaVernia, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments
thank you WhiteSwan13

on Feb. 22 2013 at 6:36 pm
WhiteSwan13 SILVER, Hawera, Other
8 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is Impossible & We Live and Learn

Oh wow! I love this poem!!

on Feb. 20 2013 at 8:36 pm
AWriter101 SILVER, Rockton, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
being single doesn't mean you are week it means that you are strong enough to wait for what you deserve! -Niall Horan

Really Great!!!!! You are a great writer!!  

on Jan. 22 2013 at 12:42 am
shayKittyFlcoka GOLD, Blockingham, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't give my emtions to people who dont matter to me. you cant make me angry, happy, sad, or watever unless you count.

this poem really makes u sit down and think. and even recall the old times/ the pic really matches too. great job!