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What happened to us?

February 15, 2012
By Brittany16 SILVER, Population, Illinois
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Never give up even if things get hard. Things get hard before they get easy.

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Raising our good voices for no reason
Why do we keep arguing every night?
I think maybe that our hearts are freezing
Remember back then we were very tight?
At first, we just started off to be friends
But then we became just a little more
We had a very special night that ends
Did you know after that night, that I tore?
It tore my heart in half just like before
After that, things did change a lot for us
We became more than friends and now its war
Now, I can’t stop from getting mad and cuss
Look back, back at the good times that we had
As you can see, those good times were not bad

© Ashley W., Port Charlotte, FL

The author's comments:
This sonnet is about me and my boyfriend Luke. We were always arguing. We met threw his dad who was dating my mom's friend. We barely talked and didn't "talk" till two years later(2011). We became more than friends and everything was great. Then, our world changed and the arguing began. I hate it so much. I wrote this poem in my fourth hour study hall this year(2012)
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Brittany16 SILVER said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 10:04 pm
Brittany16 SILVER, Population, Illinois
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Well, thank you very much and as I, hope we can work things out. Things are getting better but hey, it gives me something to write about. Thanks!
AbigailElizabeth SILVER said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:28 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
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I hope your boyfriend and you can figure things out! Fighting is the worst. Good poem. Never stop writing!