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Wings of seduction

January 12, 2011
By WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
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Flutter your wings ever so high and test
My knowledge as to why you cannot fly
Continue your path and soon you'll go west
When you'll rebel, your death screams to the sky
Informing me of your unfaithful self
Darling you were once a truthful beauty
But to what extent have you been to dealt
But to what extent was your agony
Did it hurt? Did it burn? Were you in pain?
You were like an owl stalking for you love
Your pain turned you into something so vain
I could make a wish on you flying above
Before you last time look inside your heart
And flutter your wings for our last depart

© Brian M., Fishers, IN

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WriterFighter PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 6:05 pm
WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
32 articles 3 photos 23 comments

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*Women and men are very different, but not when it comes down to their heart

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Thank you! I guess we learn something different everyday.
WriterFighter PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2011 at 8:19 pm
WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
32 articles 3 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Women and men are very different, but not when it comes down to their heart

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You have the right to comment, where do you see the wrong pattern in the syllables? 10 syllables per line were my instructions on this sonnet, and 14 lines. Shakespearean Sonnet.