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My Fail of a Sonnet

August 4, 2010
By bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Looking in his eyes, my heart starts to say,
“Your smile is like the waxing sunshine,
Brightening my life just like a bouquet.
Your face is moonlight, unique, and divine.”

Because he is himself he’s not a blur.
Unlike a fire, his flames never die.
As sweet as salt is not, he sends me a fleur.
Just like a turtle his brain will not fry.

When I am near you my mind is a bird.
Around you I’m in love-caused denial.
Oh, how I fret when your voice is unheard,
And your presence is gone for some long while!

No matter, this man remains in my mind,
So no other is as great of a find.



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on Sep. 14 2010 at 4:47 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Eric, I'm not gonna tell you anyways, so don't bother.  Why do you want to know so badly?

on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:25 pm
Artst123 SILVER, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, throw them back and tell life to make its own lemonade.<br /> When life gives you melons, you know something is wrong<br /> <br /> &quot;I write to create<br /> In the world&rsquo;s massive novel<br /> A page of my own&quot; <br /> <br /> -By Emily M., NW Washington, DC

okay then! But I will still geuss!

on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:16 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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I won't tell.  It's a secret, sorry.

on Sep. 12 2010 at 8:58 pm
Artst123 SILVER, Burlington, Massachusetts
5 articles 3 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, throw them back and tell life to make its own lemonade.<br /> When life gives you melons, you know something is wrong<br /> <br /> &quot;I write to create<br /> In the world&rsquo;s massive novel<br /> A page of my own&quot; <br /> <br /> -By Emily M., NW Washington, DC

hi! I haven't been on in a while, but here I am! I'm going to be submitting more art soon, so hang tight! nice sonnet! Who is it about?