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March 23, 2010
By hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"If everything seems under control, you're just not going fast enough." - Mario Andretti


Never, never, never do I forget
the simple, flannel-shirted smiles you left
on my doorstep as I watched the sunset
alone, quietly, a painting of theft
creeping slowly across a darkened sky.
I ran through my thoughts, memories of old
parking tickets and thunderstorms that I
danced carelessly into, drenched in the cold
raindrops falling through the air. With laughter
and trees like skyscrapers and Marching Bands
of Manhattan, endless repeat, after
we said good-bye. Now home, with empty hands,
a tinge of bittersweet guilt in my veins,
doesn't appeal to my bright Mary Janes.



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on Dec. 3 2010 at 11:58 pm
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone&#039;s going to hurt you. You just have to decide who&#039;s worth the pain.<br /> <br /> Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

I love this! 

My favourite line is "the simple, flannel-shirted smiles you left" :)


Nyrihaz said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 4:37 pm
Nyrihaz, Isabela, Other
0 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Listen to the screams a silent room makes&quot;

Very good. Great descriptions and images. I, very personaly, liked "...flannel-shirted smiles..." I touched a nerve on me. Made me smile. Really liked it.

on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:08 am
Anique_ThePoet GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
10 articles 33 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A writer should write with his eyes and painter paint with his ears.&quot; ~Gertrude Stein~

this is amazing i love the description on here!