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I Need You

January 31, 2010
By KaitlynC GOLD, Oneonta, New York
KaitlynC GOLD, Oneonta, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"when i met you i fell in love and you smiled because you knew" ~William Shakespear


Look into my eyes, and listen to my words.
I only have an image now, I want your heart and soul.
Without you my life is nothing but a blur.
You need to come over babe it's getting kind of cold.
Listen to my melody and tell me what you hear.
Take my hand and tell me what you feel.
Come on now hun theres nothing left to fear.
If you took my heart it wouldn't be a steal.
If i fell in love with you would i be falling to fast?
Forget about what happens next we have till after death.
If I could be with you how long would we last?
Take my hand love we have forever left.
I knew it from the start
You were the one who took my heart.


The author's comments:
This piece was used for my english class. My teacher gave us a test and at the end we had to write a sonnet. and this was what I wrote. this peice mainly has to do with events that were happening around that time period when I wrote it.

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ophelia said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 2:58 pm
very thoughtful and personal piece

momofkait said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 9:24 pm
this is really great!