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Inside

November 11, 2009
By Vilhelm GOLD, Elk River, Minnesota
Vilhelm GOLD, Elk River, Minnesota
19 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't work with these people. I'm going to my locker room!


Life exploding deep inside
I want to live
I want to cry

I need to feel more than this
A fiery passion
No hinderance, no lisp

All around the flaking crust
No heat, no warmth
Just twisted black puss

This need for life so overcoming
Breaking apart
My corpse consumed in everything

Will it spread and break me free?
Make my heart live
This life, this need


The author's comments:
I feel such passion for those around me. Yet, it seems almost impossible to reach them.

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on Mar. 8 2010 at 8:11 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

This is amazing. Wonderfully written, keep writing (:

on Jan. 15 2010 at 2:20 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
71 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.<br /> -L. Kimpton

this is great! very visual! :)

on Jan. 15 2010 at 12:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

Wonderfully written:)

Great poem