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the girl who only likes icing

August 24, 2018
By sydrose2018 SILVER, Linden, New Jersey
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sydrose2018 SILVER, Linden, New Jersey
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“don’t let anyone, ever, make you feel like you don’t deserve what you want.”

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shocking discovery of character detected

noticeable difference of interests from rest

simple lack of human within truly affected

views of life with neglect gently unstressed

 

explanations suddenly founded in time

answers to failure in success present

minor details with bare minimal is prime

inability of awareness unintentionally meant

 

attention beheld shortly with socializing

entertainment seeking happiness is essential

appearances conveying perfection appetizing

flavors of bland extreme with no potential

 

views sweet enticing icing designed on top

simply nothing more captivating is less to drop

© Lauren M., Marietta, GA

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self discovery of true character reveals lack of interest in what's beneath the beauty.

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