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Empty Soul

March 15, 2014
By Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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I smile and say
i'm happy,but my
eyes say otherwise.

Inside I feel like
i'm just trapped in
a room slowly dying,
and there is no way out.

Sometimes no matter where
i am i feel like i'm drowning
but everyone else is breathing.
I try to swim to the top, but
there is no top.

I'm to sad to smile, but yet
i'm to hurt to cry.

I walk around everyday wondering why, why is this happening
to me, i just feel completely
depressed and there is nobody
around to bring me to my best.

my soul used to be a room
filled with happiness and joy,
but now it's empty and its only
possession is depression.

© Elizabeth G., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
This is about how for a while i just felt like i didn't really fit in at school and nobody really liked me.
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Nelly_Nell GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2014 at 11:29 pm
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
11 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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Thamks,love and wich poem... and it would be anybetter if our names were spelled the same and thanks :) :)
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 15 2014 at 9:41 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Amazing poem! Reminds me of my own! Not only the poem..but we are both Janelles:) anyway I love ur work! Stay strong and keep smiling!!  
Nelly_Nell GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 11:22 pm
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
11 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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Thanks love because i really try my hardest to reach out so that people reading the poems can relate to them. :)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 11:11 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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This is amazing! I love the emotion you put into this piece and the reality of the problem you right aobut. I truly enjoyed reading this poem it spoke to my heart :)
Nelly_Nell GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2014 at 11:44 pm
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
11 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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Thanks love because that means i am doing my job because i really want people to feel whats being said in my poems. :)
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2014 at 10:59 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Awesome! I can relate to this and i love the emotion that is felt throughout reading it! Great work! Keep writing!
Nelly_Nell GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2014 at 10:27 pm
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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Thanks I really do try to reach out to my readers and hope that maybe they can reflect what i put in my poems to their life.
GhostMatrix SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2014 at 10:24 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-<br /> <br /> I&#039;m Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

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This makes me think about me when i was younger.   I was kinda a troubled kis in school, always got blamed even though  it wasn't my fault.               I liked the words you used.                   Good Work.               Keep Writing.
Nelly_Nell GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2014 at 10:14 pm
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
11 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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Thanks 
KarmaBites GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2014 at 9:55 pm
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Wow! The last stanza, specifically the last line, is breathtaking. This poem is relatable to a lot of people. 5/5 stars :'(