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Suicide lullaby's

February 22, 2014
By tophatjack BRONZE, Hood River, Oregon
tophatjack BRONZE, Hood River, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
I went to where we began, I left my heart there, I'll pick up the next time I need it.-Tophatjack


A suicide lullaby
Tracing his veins with a razor blade
He’s drifting back
He’ll just relax
His eyes will start to fade
Maybe the only good choice he has made
Making this a tool of trade
He holds his death at his fingertips
His heart rests in his palm
He can’t wait till I feel the calm
He knows he won’t be okay
His wrists have seen much better days
His ropes are tied
Tell his family that he tried
He doesn’t care
He can’t go nowhere
He’ll just sit and watch it hit the floor
Maybe He’ll make it to the door
Lately livings felt like such a chore
He waits for the light to leave his eyes
Giving his blank stare
No one at school knows he cries
They’ll feel bad cause he dies
The note said this is all they’re fault
But he’ll go on
Even though he’s gone



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on Mar. 18 2014 at 4:55 pm
tophatjack BRONZE, Hood River, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
I went to where we began, I left my heart there, I'll pick up the next time I need it.-Tophatjack

Thank you I appreciate the feedback

on Mar. 11 2014 at 2:00 pm
KatieJo97 SILVER, West Liberty, Ohio
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From the ashes a fire shall be woken,<br /> A light from the shadows shall spring;<br /> Renewed shall be blade that was broken,<br /> The crownless again shall be king.&rdquo; <br /> ― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring

this is awesome i can really feel the poem... i can relate....   :)