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Can't You See

September 27, 2010
By lost_in_dreams213 PLATINUM, Holcomb, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never stop dreaming, because in dreaming, we never stop living. ~ Kellan Lutz<br /> <br /> God doesn&#039;t make a &quot;no-good&quot; anything. ~ from the movie Forever Strong

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Can't you see
What you've done to me
Cant you see
What I've become

You said you loved me
Said we'd be forever
So why'd you leave me
You left me so alone

Can't you see
What you've done to me
Can't you see
What I've become

Now it's too late
I can't be saved
Now it's too late
To undo what you've done

Can't you see
Wjat you've done to me
Can't you see
What I've become

There's a sliver of hope left
In this dying heart
I'm trying to keep it
But it's slowly fading

© Michelle K., Vancouver, WA

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