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"Who Will Know"

February 5, 2010
By Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
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Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
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Stay strong; be real.

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No one knows me,
no one hears me,
no one sees me anymore.
They think they know me,
but they don't know me,
I keep my life to myself.

When did I build,
these walls around me?
Will there ever be,
someone who can save me?
Who will melt the ice
and let my river flow?
Who will know?

© Sherrell B., Philadelphia, PA

The author's comments:
(1st v. and c.) While I was playing around with some chords, I started to think about how everyone at school says they know me. But that's just it, all they do is say that they know me, but realy no one does. Even though I'm around some of them almost 24/7 it seems like no one knows the real me, and I began to wonder if anyone ever would. Don't get me wrong, my friends are awsome, but half the time the "me" they talk about is a stranger. Weird, right?
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Jeera SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 2:57 pm
Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
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Cool and thansk :)
Kaitbryn PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 8:29 pm
Kaitbryn PLATINUM, Cushing, Oklahoma
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NOT WEIRD!!!! I was talking to my youth director the other day and we started talking about just that!! No one knows the whole me, the complete me. I have out walls around my self and only show people the "me" they need to see at that moment!!

I totally get what your saying, in fact you should check out my post "walls" i9t is alot like this
StandardToaster PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:48 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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this is really deepm and could definately be made in to a really good song! check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/176118/Miss-High-and-Mighty/