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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Sep. 4 2009 at 8:32 am
SImplyMe* BRONZE, Pretoria, Wyoming
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i cant say more then what the other people said, but this piece is extraordinary, every word drips with emotion, its my biggest aspiration 2 be this good!

ACooke GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 7:09 am
ACooke GOLD, Ihiohh, New Jersey
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ah-mazing!!!! there was so much emotion behind the words and the capitol letters did a good job showing how the words meant more. good job, please consider reading my work

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:34 pm
WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW. It was really good, it has so much emotion behind it. WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW!!!!!!!

on Jul. 13 2009 at 5:33 pm
PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
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wow thats a good song, its got so much emotion. good job!