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He's Still Out There

November 20, 2010
By aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
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aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
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"Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?" -Ellen Hopkins

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I look at the sky
and realize that I can't fly
I can't escape this place
or forget his face
I wipe away the tears
but I still haven't overcome my fears
I know he's still out there
but does he still care?

The author's comments:
This was my way of venting about how I miss my father and how he doesn't take part in my life anymore. I know that he loves me at least a little because I am his child but his absence since I was three has left me confused. Is there anyone that can relate?
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