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The Blue Stain

September 8, 2010
By Reconciliar DIAMOND, Pembroke Pines, Florida
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Reconciliar DIAMOND, Pembroke Pines, Florida
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&quot;love is love&quot;<br /> &quot;You can&#039;t have a happy ending without a tragic begining, but the best part of the story is the middle.&quot; <br /> &quot;Great men fall in the fire it is the honor lesser men to light the flames no matter the cost&quot;

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Tears fall down,
And hit my pillow,
They come from an unhappy willow,
She cries in the darkness of night
To hide her weakness and let others think she’s alright
That hole in my heart,
Although closing well never truly heal,
How is this little crushed flower supposed to deal?
You’re missing important moments in my life,
And I’m still wishing that you were here.
I think about all those times we had shared,
And how I wish you knew how much I deeply cared.
I never knew what loneliness felt like,
Till you were gone and out of my life.
I wake up at night to find,
Theses dreadful tears have left stain,
But only god can stop the rain.

© Kimber E., Yorktown, VA

The author's comments:
this is a poem dedicated to my grandma, she passed away two years ago.
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Reconciliar DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 4:25 pm
Reconciliar DIAMOND, Pembroke Pines, Florida
76 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love is love&quot;<br /> &quot;You can&#039;t have a happy ending without a tragic begining, but the best part of the story is the middle.&quot; <br /> &quot;Great men fall in the fire it is the honor lesser men to light the flames no matter the cost&quot;

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thank you :)
CuteAsIce PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 11:56 am
CuteAsIce PLATINUM, Pretoria, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Today is always a good day because tomorrow is new day.

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i love how you ended the poem - it makes you think more about it
Reconciliar DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 29 2010 at 6:59 pm
Reconciliar DIAMOND, Pembroke Pines, Florida
76 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love is love&quot;<br /> &quot;You can&#039;t have a happy ending without a tragic begining, but the best part of the story is the middle.&quot; <br /> &quot;Great men fall in the fire it is the honor lesser men to light the flames no matter the cost&quot;

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thank you!! :) i sure willl
natashajeanne1021 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 10:36 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
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Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don&#039;t worry so much.

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i absoutly loved reading this! keep writing and if you get a chance you should check some of my work out? =)