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July 6, 2010
By TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

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I scream, yell, shake

you look at me in horror

I leave you in my wake.



Already out of the hall

into the outside world

the rain starts to fall

on my already wet face

© Kat M., Rockville Centre, NY

The author's comments:
another poem i found in my diary. i adjusted it a little. always liked this :)
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smieyface212 SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 3:12 pm
smieyface212 SILVER, Beachwood, Ohio
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I have many of these, but here&#039;s a main one:<br /> &quot;Animals our not ours to eat, wear or torture, they help us and our environment, and we need to take care of their environment and give them love in return&quot;

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This is really great, and I kind of see where you're coming from, but I think that this needs a little bit more organization, I don't really understand it that well, like your point isn't really clear to me, but other than that, this was nice :) I love your selection of words, mature, yet non-complicated. Keep it up!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:22 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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This is so great!!!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!