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Vastly empty sea

April 26, 2010
By SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
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Why must we part?
Part like the vastly empty sea…
Why must you leave,
When you mean so much to me?
Gone like the flowers blown in the breeze
Or like fall leaves fallen from trees…
Every time you leave it breaks my heart,
And blows the pieces apart…
Scatters them in the breeze,
And blows them through leafless trees…
Blown into a vastly empty sea.
Leaving my heart empty,
For when you are not with me…
I feel like the vastly empty sea.

© Charlotte M., Naples, FL

The author's comments:
This poem is about missing someone and feeling so empty without them.
Dedicated to Eli.
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