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Broken Heart

April 20, 2010
By SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."


My heart is broken,
Chipped to pieces,
Frozen and cold…
Once so beautiful and bold,
Now broken in shards to small to hold…
The pieces are to small,
And no pieces fit together, none at all.
Left in a pile on the floor…
Lies my cold heart broken in pieces,
To much of a mess to repair.
But, I feel so empty that I don’t care.
I see the pile and no tears fall,
Because now it doesn’t hurt… not at all.
Crashed to pieces my pain is gone,
And now I can finally move on…
Looking back at the pile lying on the floor,
I just blink and walk out the door,
Leaving my heart in cold shards lying on the floor.


The author's comments:
I wrote this imagining what it feel like to be heart broken. Dedicated to Eli.

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on Jul. 7 2010 at 10:32 pm
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."

thank you :)

on May. 11 2010 at 7:02 pm
Courtnay BRONZE, McDonald, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments
Wow ....thats really good....i had a friend whos heart was broken and i believe what you put into words was the way she felt.....keep writing!!!!:)