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Mouse Trap

September 23, 2009
By GOlacieGO GOLD, Lawrenceburg, Indiana
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GOlacieGO GOLD, Lawrenceburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I want a life that sizzles and pops and makes me laugh out loud. I want my everyday to make God belly laugh, glad that he gave life to someone who loves the gift, who will use it up and wring it out and drag it around like a favorite sweater." -SN

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There once was a mouse named Louise
who craved for the taste of cheese.
He said, “It looks good,
and I know that I could,
but that trap would give me a squeeze.”

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IfLifeGivesYouLemons PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 24 2012 at 7:55 pm
IfLifeGivesYouLemons PLATINUM, Sacramento, California
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When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down &#039;happy&#039;. They told me I didn&#039;t understand the assignment. I told them they didn&#039;t understand life

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This is great. I love that it's actually a limerick. There are so many poems in this category that are more like ballads than anything, it's wonderful to finally see a properly written limerick. 
Dlord910 said...
on Oct. 22 2012 at 8:14 am
Dlord910, Wilmington, North Carolina
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Funny. I like the use and good and could
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:53 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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cute! :) i like how you wrote the poem from what the mouse was thinking. cute poem, and very creative :) great job ;) check out some of my newest work if you could, i love the feedback.