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A Natural

October 27, 2015
By futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And though she be but little, she is fierce."- Shakespeare


I hope one day to

Write haiku as great as I

Breathe through my nostrils



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on Nov. 4 2015 at 11:03 am
futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And though she be but little, she is fierce."- Shakespeare

@Joseph_B I am great at breathing through my nostrils; it comes quite easy for me. It has always been hard for me to write haiku. Therefore, I hope one day to write haiku as great as I breathe through my nostrils. Personally, I think that anyone who comments to critique someone's work should be careful to correct their own spelling and grammatical errors before pointing out the author's "flaws"- don't you agree?

on Nov. 3 2015 at 9:57 pm
Joseph_B BRONZE, Plaqumine, Louisiana
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Personally I don’t like this poem it comes off lazy and it doesn’t make that much of since when you think about it. The line in the poem that I don’t understand is “Write haiku as great as I Breathe through my nostrils.” I am confused in this quoted text by which, am I the reader suppose to believe that you breathing through your nostrils is so amazing that you wish you could write a haiku the same way.