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March 3, 2015
By Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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at least I tried to
hold on to what we never
really had

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Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 14 2016 at 7:23 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you so much! I'm also very proud of this one, so I'm glad you liked it ; u ;
ThrillQueen126 said...
on Feb. 14 2016 at 11:47 am
ThrillQueen126, Seattle, Washington
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I love how even your shortest poems manage to convey so much emotion, while leaving room for the imagination. Amazing job, and congrats on getting published!
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2015 at 10:29 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you! I actually had no idea I'd get published, especially not twice in two consecutive months. This is amazing, really.
.king. SILVER said...
on Jun. 3 2015 at 11:20 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

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This is awesome! I love haiku and your style. Tbh, I'm not surprised you got published, 'cuz I knew you always had it in you. =^.^=
Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 4 2015 at 6:51 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Awesome! So happy I could re-introduce this book. And again, I'm proud of your poem being in the magazine.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on May. 4 2015 at 12:35 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you, Mackay- I'm glad you took the time to read this. And I'm really happy to be in the magazine, so thank you again. I just found the book on Amazon, and it looks really good. I'm going to buy it for myself, I think. So thank you a third time for introducing it to me!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 30 2015 at 5:40 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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it reminds me of this book i saw today at a book store called chasers of the light by tyler knott gregson. it's ridiculously cute but astounding. if you haven't read it, go buy it. it's worth it: the style and formatting and the poems themselves.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 30 2015 at 5:28 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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again you create something seemingly tiny, like a pearl. yet, as a pearl, it's gorgeous even amidst all the sand and chaos and despair of this world. nicely done. and congrats on the publication. ^u^
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 12:35 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you. I can certainly see that being true.
Amara-rose GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2015 at 5:10 am
Amara-rose GOLD, Pendleton, Indiana
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Let go and live.

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Another great poem i feel like it coinsides with the first one i commened on
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2015 at 2:10 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you very much, Muppet Silver.
Lysander PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 31 2015 at 11:43 pm
Lysander PLATINUM, Bangalore, Other
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I slay.

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awsum !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2015 at 10:57 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you. At this point, I honestly can't remember if I meant to do that, but at this point I don't think it would sound better in the format.
TheDolphin ELITE said...
on Mar. 22 2015 at 10:13 pm
TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
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I love how you deviated from the haiku format. This is so amazing. 10/10
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 17 2015 at 6:25 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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I'm rather amazed I didn't notice that, to be honest @-@ How did I get an editors' choice for this?
Redolvene GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2015 at 3:56 pm
Redolvene GOLD, Sunny, Florida
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I really like the concept of your poem, it's creative and original. However, technically it's not a haiku because the last line has only three syllables instead of five. Great work though and congrats on getting editors choice! :)
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 16 2015 at 2:26 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you, Gursimar. I'll be sure to write more.
Gursimar BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2015 at 8:22 am
Gursimar BRONZE, Sirsa, Other
4 articles 1 photo 21 comments

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&ldquo;Live your truth. Express your love. Share your enthusiasm. Take action towards your dreams. Walk your talk. Dance and sing to your music. Embrace your blessings. Make today worth remembering.&rdquo;

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Well done Amai-kun
Gursimar BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2015 at 8:21 am
Gursimar BRONZE, Sirsa, Other
4 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Live your truth. Express your love. Share your enthusiasm. Take action towards your dreams. Walk your talk. Dance and sing to your music. Embrace your blessings. Make today worth remembering.&rdquo;

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This is the first Haiku I have read,Its very good.