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Arrest The Stars

January 18, 2015
By Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Criminals of sky

wink with vile mischieveries

yet to come alive.

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2015 at 5:34 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thanks, a lot.
RobotPenn. SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 11:12 am
RobotPenn. SILVER, El Paso, Texas
8 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Profound change is cumulative.&quot;

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Oh my. This is lovely. I adore simple poems, and this one might just be the most beautiful one I've ever read. I agree with @Amai-kun, both versions are equally pretty. So freakin' pretty.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2015 at 8:26 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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I can't even tell which version I like better...
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 7:31 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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@Beila I can't really explain how thankful I am for all your comments. Really, comments like yours keep me writing. Thanks :)
Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2015 at 11:20 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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&quot;The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco.&quot; -Mark Twain

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Okay, so now I am hooked. "Call Me Crazy" might have been that incredible by chance, but having read this.... Apparently, you just know how. How to do what? I'm not sure yet. But I am really enjoying trying to figure it out. Three lines- one word: Mindblowing.