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Just Saying

October 12, 2014
By Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
31 articles 4 photos 69 comments

From writing I learned 

that good poems don't have to

be five pages long.


The author's comments:

It took me awhile to understand this


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on Oct. 21 2014 at 6:58 pm
Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
31 articles 4 photos 69 comments
Thank you :) sure. I'll check daily:)

on Oct. 21 2014 at 8:11 am
Authorian BRONZE, Coshocton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
To cry is to let go of all the pain and let the world see you doing it

Hmm, there is rarely much to say about haikus, so I'll put what I can: Haikus are easy to make dull and meaningless, but this one has a small story. That being, it states and demonstrates an opinion at the same time, which I think is beautiful. Overall 8.2/10. (My poem is still under review by the editors, so if you'd just check every once in a while I'd appreciate it. It's called 'perception'