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"Slipped from Heaven"

July 19, 2013
By cvhswriter BRONZE, Castro Valley, California
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"Step down, now look up. The possibilities are infinite for you and me. Let creativity and curiosity lead the way." - cvhswriter 2013.

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Slipping and sliding
The dangers foreshadow my
Evident downfall

© Patrick B., Stony Brook, NY

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 6:08 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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And I love the title as well. 
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 6:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Somewhat funny, in the way that it reminds me of all the falls I've had. And very true. I love the word "foreshadow" in here. It sends the message clearly to the reader.