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Ocean

April 13, 2013
By steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Drops of salt hit my
Face, the cool wind making goose
Bumps on my bare skin.



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 4 2013 at 5:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

You're a ninja with haikus. And that was a pun with your name. But I've said it before to other nija-haikuers. 

on Apr. 18 2013 at 8:27 pm
StarGazer9 GOLD, Marana, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do.&quot;

Normally I'm not a fan of haikus, but i enjoyed this one :) Good job. 

on Apr. 18 2013 at 8:18 pm
steelsoprano DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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How would I make it better? Honestly, not trying to be sarcastic.

nikkiluvzu said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 3:48 pm
nikkiluvzu, New Hope, Minnesota
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ok-ish i liked it but a little bland  

on Apr. 18 2013 at 1:31 pm
RichardPHSReed BRONZE, Hampton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Can we live Without music?

Pretty good

on Apr. 18 2013 at 9:26 am
that was an amazing poem.