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January 22, 2013
By RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
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RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
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"Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it."

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Death won’t stop coming
Living is the beginning
See the very ending

© Matt B., Marblehead, MA

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 23 2014 at 11:21 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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We do live and die. But I think we live and die and live again. . . 
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2014 at 10:16 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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True, that is a good point. A very good point...thank you for telling me that.
RyanM. PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2014 at 3:20 am
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
30 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it.&quot;

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This poem is meant to point out that we live and die. That that is the most constant thing in this world. 
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 24 2014 at 1:54 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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Maybe if we change some things...the ending is the beginning and death will stop coming in the end. If that makes sense...those are the only things, I disagree with, in what you're saying in your poem...but despite that I disagree with what you're saying in your poem, your poem is amazingly written. Really...thanks for sharing your heart.